Thursday, 11 April 2019
narrative writing
11th of april 2019
purpose:narrate
audience:teachers
the tiger and black panther
by Ellie
once upon there was a tiger he's name was Cookie Cookie the tiger has a nice twist to it and there was a black panther and he's name was Noir in french that means black anyway they were superheros cookie wasn't a very good superhero all he wanted to do was sleep and neither was Noir all he wanted to do was eat but they were the only descent superheros in there city all the others like black widow and wonder women and superman and batman we on vacation to Hawaii and there there for 3 more weeks so they have a mission there mission is to look after the town and don't let bad people in and they did for 2 week and then 2 goblin came to stay for 5 night and made a mess everywhere so they had to clean up the whole city in to days and when i say the whole city i mean the whole city so they set a schedule so they could do what they love as well as clean the town so for 3 hour they clean and for 4 do what they love and keep switching between the two so in total it was 8 hours of switching for a 2 full days and then the other super heroes came back from there Holiday and everything was good again and looks the same as when they left superman and wonder-woman both said wow it look so tidy we didn't think that it you guy would keep it tidy guys Cookie and Noir both said thanks we know we didn't either and then winked at each other
the end
purpose:narrate
audience:teachers
the tiger and black panther
by Ellie
once upon there was a tiger he's name was Cookie Cookie the tiger has a nice twist to it and there was a black panther and he's name was Noir in french that means black anyway they were superheros cookie wasn't a very good superhero all he wanted to do was sleep and neither was Noir all he wanted to do was eat but they were the only descent superheros in there city all the others like black widow and wonder women and superman and batman we on vacation to Hawaii and there there for 3 more weeks so they have a mission there mission is to look after the town and don't let bad people in and they did for 2 week and then 2 goblin came to stay for 5 night and made a mess everywhere so they had to clean up the whole city in to days and when i say the whole city i mean the whole city so they set a schedule so they could do what they love as well as clean the town so for 3 hour they clean and for 4 do what they love and keep switching between the two so in total it was 8 hours of switching for a 2 full days and then the other super heroes came back from there Holiday and everything was good again and looks the same as when they left superman and wonder-woman both said wow it look so tidy we didn't think that it you guy would keep it tidy guys Cookie and Noir both said thanks we know we didn't either and then winked at each other
the end
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