Dear Ellie, Im Manvi from Saint Marys School Gisborne. I really liked the powerful background and how you are passionate about sharing your work with the world and how confident you are. Maybe next time read it through and look out for some mistakes and maybe add some words when you added pictures overall good job! Ma Te Wai Manvi :)
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Dear Ellie, Im Manvi from Saint Marys School Gisborne.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the powerful background and how you are passionate about sharing your work with the world and how confident you are.
Maybe next time read it through and look out for some mistakes and maybe add some words when you added pictures overall good job!
Ma Te Wai
Manvi :)
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ReplyDeleteHi Ellie
ReplyDeleteI really like the background it is really pretty.
good job on finishing all your work.
The pictures show a great demonstration of your work.